Written and directed by: Simon Kinberg
Following a dearth of criticism, debuting-director Simon Kinberg felt the need to apologize for the shortcomings of his new X-Men film: Dark Phoenix. As the supposed leader of a film that the end credits boast “employed 15 000 people,” it’s understandable why he felt the need to take such responsibility. Dark Phoenix, furthermore. stands out amongst X-Men films in that the same man served as its screenwriter and director. But while that put Kinberg in a unique position to be responsible for the film’s shortcomings, I don’t think his auteurship should go entirely uncredited.
The X-Men have never been like other superheroes. Rather than seeing themselves as humans who miraculously acquired powers through mutation, they see themselves/are cast by society as outcasts known as Mutants. They don’t brandish their powers with the arrogance of an Iron Man or Thor, but instead use them to defend themselves from bigotry and/or take on the “With great power comes great responsibility” philosophy. As such, their stories are less action (or at least explosion) driven than those of other superheroes, and flirt with the idea of being philosophically or politically driven. Unfortunately, the films never quite achieve their ambitions, due to a combination of having too many characters and not knowing how to proportionally represent those characters in their scripts.
For much of the X-Men series, the main characters have been Professor X (James McAvoy) and Magneto (Michael Fassbender). Centreing these characters is like re-writing Harry Potter and having the main characters be Dumbledore (X) and Snape (Magneto): Dumbledore being mysteriously pure, Snape being mysteriously tormented. In Harry Potter, this mysteriousness is allowed to rise to its full potential, precisely because it is left in the background for the film’s younger protagonists to decipher. The X-Men series has left its Harry, Ron and Hermione equivalents (Jean Grey, Cyclops and Storm: Wolverine being the exception) in secondary roles, meaning its mysterious titans are over exposed, and its spunky, but ordinary protagonists rendered forgettable (few would care about Harry Potter either, let alone Ron Weasley, if he was a secondary character in a Dumbledore novel).
In Dark Phoenix, Simon Kinberg sought to change that, telling a story that brings the powerful yet sensitive Jean Grey (Sophie Turner) to its forefront. While unfortunately the script, despite having the potential to do so, did not do the same for Cyclops (Tye Sheridan), at very least, in Grey it brings forward a unique and well-chosen protagonist.
Alongside Grey, the film has a reasonable number of co-main characters, choices rooted in the previous young X-Men films: Professor X, Mystique (Jennifer Lawrence) and Beast (Hank McCoy). I’ve written before that I wished Avengers Infinity War had been written in such a way that it could be enjoyable to people who simply knew the characters and had not been long-term fans of the Marvel Cinematic Universe. To Kinberg’s credit, I think he achieved that in his writing of Dark Phoenix with the professor, Jean and Mystique all having clearcut objectives. Unfortunately, the flip side of this is that Kinberg’s previously-shown strengths as a dialogue writer were not put on display in Dark Phoenix. The film is weighed-down with expository dialogue. I bring this up not because I am a film snob who needs my dose of “subtlety,” but rather because the quality of the dialogue takes a toll on the quality of the story. One of the film’s subplots is that Professor X has grown arrogant about the potential of his X-Men, and Mystique worries he has stopped caring about their own wellbeing. While the nuance of the McAvoy-portrayed professor is an improvement over the particularly Dumbledore-esque Patrick Stewart-version of the character, this subplot swings the pendulum too far in the opposite direction. What should feel like a story of Professor X’s moral judgement becoming slightly clouded, comes to feel like a Disney Channel fabel about thinking about others.
While perhaps the script’s non-subtle writing was the price to pay for its comprehensibility, I think the real culprit was Kinberg’s choice to write a villain (Jessica Chastain) into the script, when he could have instead taken his time with Grey’s tale of inner turmoil and had that take up the whole movie. In this sense Dark Phoenix does not make a radical enough break from the series’ past approach of not really having main characters: a point which can also be made about the film’s ending which, much like that of X-Men: The Last Stand, feels conclusive, but not in a way that matches the spirit of the story that proceeded it.
Dark Phoenix brought out one of the great comic-book stories in telling Jean’s tale. It continued and advanced the X-Men tradition by presenting what should perhaps be remembered as one of the great non-violent action scenes of all time (a bit in which Cyclops, Jean, Storm (Alexandra Shipp), Quick Silver (Evan Peters), Beast, Nightcrawler (Kody Smit-McPhee) and Mystique) charmingly showcase their powers to save a collapsing spaceship. While Dark Phoenix’s awkward second-half and lack of subtlety may explain the bad reviews, it showed shimmers of the great movie it could have been, which is why, for all its fault, superhero and film buffs should give it a critical chance.